father

Final Rating: 5.09. Finished: 27 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: zohaib

Description: just father defending his child

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 1 week

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Amdbcg:

looks good :)

Igor Medovshikov:

I like the way turns in the chair. Feels very natural.

Matt Hirengen:

good job! the acting is a little cliche, but it's executed very well.

Josh:

I really like the finger doddle at the beginning.

Erik Griott:

it starts off pretty good, and the end is alright, but i felt his hand gestures were off. the first hand gesture he makes when he taps the table feels too soft, then when he points it feels too strong. i don't think his body supported the gesture enough.

Kim Allen:

Great work. loved the little finger doodles he does at the start.

David Higgins:

Good. Lip synch needs improving - it seems very bland and not up to the standard of the rest of the animation.

Daniel Erwin:

its funny i was drawn into, and focused on his right hand the whole time

natalie:

Very nice, very correct but.. will I remember him, I wonder?

Hugo Cierzniak:

good acting but the lipsynch need to be worked more.

Martin Silfvast:

Very nice!

Candace Giancanelli:

good job! the sync of the lips need a bit more attention, maybe add asymmetry or vary the widith, have him frown in a change emotions.

Barnabas Boehler:

Starts out really nicely. Although, I think the mouth-shapes and lip-synch might need another pass for the first half

A few hand gestures feel a bit jerky...I think you just need to work on spacing in a few areas to make the transitions feel smooth, but not floaty.

Jonathan Gonçalves:

not sure about the lip sync but is gooood!

Florent Perrin:

You tried good things here, just a lack of polishing to really push it up.

Matthew:

Love the subtle movements on the foreground character.

asif:

really nice. good luck

Chad Swanson:

good job

Frank G:

I had to come back to this one and award more stars. Nice acting.

Omri Navot:

Great poses in the body; work a little more on the lip synch and facial animation