father
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Amdbcg:
looks good :)
Igor Medovshikov:
I like the way turns in the chair. Feels very natural.
Matt Hirengen:
good job! the acting is a little cliche, but it's executed very well.
Josh:
I really like the finger doddle at the beginning.
Erik Griott:
it starts off pretty good, and the end is alright, but i felt his hand gestures were off. the first hand gesture he makes when he taps the table feels too soft, then when he points it feels too strong. i don't think his body supported the gesture enough.
Kim Allen:
Great work. loved the little finger doodles he does at the start.
David Higgins:
Good. Lip synch needs improving - it seems very bland and not up to the standard of the rest of the animation.
Daniel Erwin:
its funny i was drawn into, and focused on his right hand the whole time
natalie:
Very nice, very correct but.. will I remember him, I wonder?
Hugo Cierzniak:
good acting but the lipsynch need to be worked more.
Martin Silfvast:
Very nice!
Candace Giancanelli:
good job! the sync of the lips need a bit more attention, maybe add asymmetry or vary the widith, have him frown in a change emotions.
Barnabas Boehler:
Starts out really nicely. Although, I think the mouth-shapes and lip-synch might need another pass for the first half
A few hand gestures feel a bit jerky...I think you just need to work on spacing in a few areas to make the transitions feel smooth, but not floaty.
Jonathan Gonçalves:
not sure about the lip sync but is gooood!
Florent Perrin:
You tried good things here, just a lack of polishing to really push it up.
Matthew:
Love the subtle movements on the foreground character.
asif:
really nice. good luck
Chad Swanson:
good job
Frank G:
I had to come back to this one and award more stars. Nice acting.
Omri Navot:
Great poses in the body; work a little more on the lip synch and facial animation









Animator: zohaib
Description: just father defending his child
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 1 week