Gifted People

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Animator: Martin Silfvast

Description: A father is trying hard to help his apparently very gifted son.

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 35 hours

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Matt Hirengen:

good poses, but it's very jerky.

colus havenga:

your animation curves needs some attention, theres a couple of bumps and kinks that can be ironed out. but well done

natalie:

he sure looks like a "dad". You caught that bit wonderfully.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

you need to work on animation. its little bit of jerky

chakravarma:

when character says "THEN"....that pose sense me like he is afraid of some thing...

Barnabas Boehler:

Some of the movements feel a bit static and jerky here.

I would reccomend getting a book on the Principles of Animation such as "The Animator's Survival Kit". That book is the bible for animators and is a huge help for explaining the principles of animation.!! Good luck!

Matt Kelly:

clean up and strengthen those poses... definitely try to clean out those pops.. "then" pose is really weak and twinned

Mark Homoky:

Very nicely done.

Matthew:

I don't know if this rig has this functionality, but if you had pucker on your lipsync, it would look a lot better. I like what your doing with the head, but don't try to get away with less work by not showing the body. Do some acting exercises 'till your comfortable with full body acting.