Matt Hirengen:

Ha! didn't know I could critique my own animation! ok, the dad's too floaty and he needs waaaay more overlapping action and attention to arcs. Also, his acting could stand to be pushed a bit more. I'm happy with the little nosepicker, but he could use more anticipation at some points.

Amdbcg:

ewww !

Christopher Salamat:

the animation though fluid and subtle may be too subtle for the audio

Curtis:

a little mor weight shift in the hips, and repositioning his hand a little on his hips would give that arm a little mor elife.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

This was really good. The timing of the lip sync was perfect. The body language was nice and subtle. All I could say is that it needed a little more energy in the movements, just a little, to make it look completely natural. Well done.

David Jonson:

More movements

Raasi N:

Son catches more attention than father simply because he is better animated character than the father.Father's animation can get a lot of push by adding more facial expressions as well working on his posing - e.g adding more asymmetry to it...

Martin Silfvast:

good effort

Matt Kelly:

make sure you do actual weight transfers instead of just bouncing up and down on your hips

Traci Plagmann:

Not bad - try pushing some of your gestures a bit more. The emotion in the voice is a bit stronger than some of your gestures.

Chad Swanson:

Picking buggers! I like the anticipation on him eating it too that was funny. The fathers lack of facial expressions kind of took away from this one for me though.

James Fearn-Wannan:

That's good. I think a bit more variation in the poses wouldn't be a bad idea, though. the father seems to basically be standing up straight and waving his left hand. Some bigger and more pronounced shifts in weight and quicker, more focused actions would be nice.