Stephen Baur:

the dad looks like he gets too angry for the sound clip when yelling at the phone. overall, good poses though!

Amdbcg:

I like the concept :)

Ed. Hull:

Nice animation, but I feel the father character seems to act out too much. His acting seems to have him yelling into the phone, but the dialog has a very controlled tone of voice.

Matt Hirengen:

great acting.

Forrest:

good, the anger you animated feels more vehement than the audio clip suggests so it doesnt quite fit, but the animation itself is very nice.

Sergey B.:

THat's great

Kayum:

Some really nice moving holds and follow-throughs going on here. There are also some nice pleasing poses that read clearly. With some more polish it could look really nice. Keep an eye on the timing of the poses.
Good job man

Shon Stewart:

I like the anger! he really looks angry!

I like that he's whispering at the beginning. It would be more powerful if he turned away from his sleeping son when his voice is raised. right now his son would wake up from the volume of his fathers voice.

David Higgins:

A little exaggerated for someone talking on the phone. Not sure what benefit the sleeping kid had on the scene - there was no interaction or link to the story there.

Barnabas Boehler:

Really nice work here. I really like when he starts shaking a little in his rage.

I'm not sure why he taps the table with the back of his hand at the beginning. Also, the lip synch could use some work.

But I really like the overall movement and gestures! I can definitely see you have a lot of potential to produce some cool stuff

Erik Griott:

very good. i like how he remembers that his son is sleeping and then tries to keep his conversation more contained.

Martin Silfvast:

NIce!

chakravarma:

nice work....
he is disturbing his kid sleep.hahaha

Renato Fochi:

Love the acting!!
Good animation too!!
great work!

jonas bech:

perhaps a little to angry

Mark Homoky:

You have to feel sorry for that little lad - falling asleep on his books.

A nice concept and interpretation fairly well executed. I'm not sure the father needed to pull the phone away from his head though, his voice is only slightly raised in the audio and the animation makes it almost look more like he's yelling down the phone.

Otherwise some nice touches and clearly a well thought out idea.

Leow Chan Ghee:

You have really good strong poses, and I think your animation could be stronger if you could get them hit the right accents at the right time. The overall acting choices are pretty good, although I feel that you could cut down on the time he spends talking 'away' from the phone.

Aron Durkin:

good, maybe the anger is a bit overplayed

Paul Wei:

Nice phrasing. The gesture at frame 42 could be a little more subtle and toned down.

Matthew:

The "anything" pose and the "agknowledge that" pose could have been hit sooner. Also, you're overacting.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think the animation itself is good here buuuuut I'm not totally convinced that his sudden flipping-out really fits the audio.