My Son Has A Gift
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Carlos Chavez:
looking good, just a bit stiff to me...it needs some polishing in the spine..
also translations seem a bit too fast
Matt Hirengen:
a bit jerky, but good.
Amdbcg:
I like your action, but where's the gifted son?
Sunny Kharbanda:
Good work on the face. I think the gestures get a little too "indicative" at times, which weakens the acting. Still, good effort overall.
Stewart:
Hand on the desk.
colus havenga:
a few 'too fast' movements but overall very good
David Higgins:
Some problems with the hands in the first half but other than this is a pretty good job.
Barnabas Boehler:
Great Job Boogz!
Just keep working on the offset and overlap
Carol Cheng:
Great job! Good animation and lip sync. I think your work.
Martin Silfvast:
good effort
Mark Homoky:
Superb! I'm sure this is the best lip sync I've seen so far. Couple that with a great expressive face and you're definitely onto a winner. I love the way the character talks directly to the camera - implying we're the ones in trouble! Good luck!
Clayton:
love the 'stache
Florent Perrin:
Labial is quite cool there!
E. Cooman:
Great LS!
Carlos Fins:
Good progression change.. I think it just has too many poses.
Raasi N:
...Everything is cool....only suggestion for the left hand's pinky finger...looks too straight as if not posed...e.g frame 52-57
Paul Fuller:
I think everything is looking great. The main crit I have is with the ending blink. He has a mean stare before the blink and then he becomes almost unsure for no apparent reason. Nice motion mechanics though, good work.
Frank G:
Pose to strong pose animating. Good start and finish. I'm not a fan of the 'point' gesture (used by the people using the AM rig). Lacks some of the subtlety of the higher marked animations (that statement will look really silly when this animation wins). It's a good strong animation. Still scored lots of stars from me.
Chad Swanson:
nice animation!
James Fearn-Wannan:
There are some strong actions in there. "My son has a gift", in particular. The flow gets a bit lost towards the end, though, I think.
Animator: Kevin Scott
Description: A dad trying to convince a guy that his son is right for the audition.
Experience: 1 1/2 years
Time taken: worked on it about a week. but wish i hadnt started so late.