Yes, He Can Dance!!

Final Rating: 3.93. Finished: 73 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: Ismael Baclay Deocares

Description: A choreographer and father of a contestant in a dance reality show tries to convince his producer to keep his son in the competition instead of staging his elimination.

Experience: 2 years of college

Time taken: About 6 days.

Comments:

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Darrell:

need to emphasize the kids actions a little more, it will help add from the emotion of the story

luv2animate:

I love son's balley!!!nice one!!

Matt Hirengen:

good job. a bit floaty though.

Carlos Chavez:

good work, just too much twinning at times..

Ed Lucas:

I laughed so hard at the kid doing ballet., but the only thing is I think it takes away from the father's acting. Nice job bro

natalie:

fine location - I like the kid, wont remember dad because of the kid, though. (take it as a compliment, please)

David Higgins:

Some cuts to remove the continuous distraction of th ekid would have improved this.

Andre de Villiers:

when the son does a little jump he seems a bit weightless... The lipsync comes a little late, pull it back 1 or 2 frames. The father seems somewhat disjointed, tighten up the movement between hip and torso.

Martin Silfvast:

Not bad!

Matthew Murray:

nice idea, but the hands didn't really match the performance

barak drori:

I think that there's too much overlapping there

Florent Perrin:

Good ideas down there but I think you should try to calm down your poses and rythm... :)

Paul Fuller:

The hands are a little floaty on the father, but the kids movements are really nice.

E. Cooman:

A bit more attention to the lipsync.
Overall, nice work!

Christiaan Moleman:

The slow hand-wave around acknowledge feels weird... not like an arm + hand, and kind of out of sync with his words.

I like your acting choices at the end, but the double head twitch on "talk about" is a bit severe. Maybe soften it a bit.