Ed Lucas:

I laughed pretty good at this one, t

Matt Hirengen:

good job, it could be pushed a little more though.

David Colacioppo:

He facial expression seems too sad. It works in the beginning but the rest of the clip he should be more dramatic and intense.

natalie:

Tricky! making someone the object of scornful laughter will always get a good score.

Cameron Huber:

The movements are feeling wicked to me! The only one that stood out was when he says "he has a gift!" - because the spine flips back on itself giving a mirrored effect rather than a lean. Remove the opposing c curve in the spine through that movement and exaggerate the breakdown to give it a smoother transition.

The lip sync is pretty cool but you need to hold on your M's B's and P's for a frame or two longer. If you only hold them for one frame, then they tend to snap as you have here.

Generally really wicked stuff man!

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

concept is ok but you need to work on animation

Walker Sultzbach:

The cutaway of the test was to short.

Kayum:

I like the comedy timing on the cut. You probably don't need the text in the top right, and try to work layers of expresion into his face and eyes.

Andre de Villiers:

Needs more emotion expressed in the brows, check your eyelines aswell. Lipsync needs some tweaking, especially around "...He has a gift!"

Matt Ornstein:

I like your acting choices, the lip sync needs some love though

Barnabas Boehler:

Wow, Impressive work here! I like the characters hand gestures. The only thing I can think to improve his one of his hand poses feels a bit flat..as he's touching the paper on the closeup...maybe just make the fingers a little bent.

Martin Silfvast:

good effort

Ryan Chan:

Nice clean animating. But i'm not really feeling the change in tone and emotion in the character. His facial expression are a little less dynamic as it should be and his emotional state comes off as monotone, though you can hear it in the dialog. So really hear the emotions in the dialog and emphasis it not only in gesture and attitude, but in the face and eyes as well. make it dynamic.

Jeff Simon:

great animation

Raasi N:

very good start.....can be pushed more from "..then maybe we can have something to talk about"....

Paul Fuller:

I would say to push the expressions a bit. The man doesn't really seem to care too much if the person thinks his son is terrible at math.

Frank G:

The pose on 'maybe' could have been clearer. It's a well animated piece. Nice movements. The setting was confusing and didn't add to the story for me. But that's not included when I award all these stars for the actual character animation.

Ashwani:

keep it up

Romain Digonnet:

The animation is good. The lipsinc is often off, but nice animation overall.