Matt Hirengen:

good job. I like your poses and acting choices. it's a bit too pose-to-pose timing wise though.

Barnabas Boehler:

Pretty good, man!

You made a lot of progress in since your WIP. The second characters hand is still distracting in the closeup..but that's a pretty minor detail.

Candace Giancanelli:

good job

Curtis:

hand on the shoulder seems a little out of place or the timing could be a little earlier so we have more time to read.

Matthew:

Watch your stuck holds.

John Seldon:

i think you need more bend in the knees and a bit more overlap in the actions. pretty cool though

Kevin Scott:

nice fingers on "...maybe..."

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

concept is ok but you need to work on animation

luv2animate:

Beautiful..especially the rolling of fingers..so natural!!

rajeshk:

from frame 150- 200 the guys look kinda stiff and sticked to ground .. well rest of the thing look nice

David Jonson:

Ha``three people

Paul Fuller:

Nice timing near the end, I'm just not sure why he puts his hand on the other guys shoulder.

jonas bech:

i like the render

E. Cooman:

Love the camera work and the acting.

SamoRa G:

I like the way he interacts wiv the guy he is speakin 2! gd effort!

Romain Digonnet:

The camera changes is pretty nice, and the overall animation too.
I would put more work in the face expressions that sometimes seem off or awkward, and the lipsink could be better too.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I liked that a lot. Some of the movements were a little bit more even than they, perhaps, should have been but there's some great action there.

Mark Homoky:

Very good, well thought out piece. Smooth purposeful character movement that isn't detracting from the father's movements. Well done. Good luck!