Dialogue

Final Rating: 4.33. Finished: 51 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: Ramesh

Description: Hi Guys This is first time Iam entering in this competition. First Level Animation Uploading now..

Experience: 7

Time taken: 2 Days

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Carlos Chavez:

lip sync needs work...

Matt Hirengen:

good, but the timing is a little off.

Erik Griott:

the father kind of scares me! he is staring directly at me with his eyes wide open, looks like he wants me dead! >.< also, his mouth shapes don't really match up with the dialog; it doesn't look like he is saying the words that i'm hearing.

Paul Wei:

The son's acting is really nice. The dad could use some more polish.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

concept is ok but you need to work on animation

Raasi N:

Very nice animation.Both father and son are fun to watch......

chrisbyk:

I like it very much, although the lip sync is a bit off

John Seldon:

thats good! i like that. The main issue i think is the rushed pose when he says "he has a gift!", i think it needs a smaller movement so it doesnt seem rushed.

Martin Silfvast:

good job!

chakravarma:

great work......

rajeshk:

good , but i think at frame 160.. the pose breaks the staging.. cuz the hands fills the negative space.. which the character shud be having to make his point clear.. so that audiance can read the animation clear..
anyway that my perspective.. but i like the animation. (son looks good.. : ) )

Barnabas Boehler:

Sweet..one of the best animations I've seen with that particular character.

Yvan Trejbal:

Good work with syncing the mouth to the sound clip.

Nate Lane:

Nice work :). I like the idea with the baby. One thing that I think you could work on is the lip syncing. Just get those major accents in there, and maybe a wee bit more exaggeration. It's all opinion based though. Looks great man keep it up!

Paul Fuller:

I think the biggest problem with this is the lip synch. Also, after "My son has a gift", the man's expression changes a little to abruptly.