Sue Houston:

Very cool take on it. I have to say I was confused by the firt shot. I think you could get away with just having the shot of the son at the end.

Matt Hirengen:

nice idea! good acting.

Corey McDaniel:

clever!

Carlos Chavez:

hahahaahhaah
cool idea...the animation could be stronger though

Jeremy Schichtel:

cute idea

luv2animate:

I love ur idea!!

Forrest:

a bit stiff but very clever

Justin Weg:

Very cool

colus havenga:

great idea :)

Kayum:

Ha, great idea! I love the comedy cue, and the timing works well. Perhaps work on tightening up the animation, making sure you are hitting good strong key poses. good job

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

The animation was really good, body and lip sync, but the camera isn't on the character for a lot of it.

natalie:

very interesting

Kim Allen:

cool interpretation of the clip. Nice work

David Higgins:

Great concept. The animation is a little too subtle for my taste.

V_I_C_K_Y:

Woh Woh Dude Nice Stuff, I loved it ;) Cool..!

Guo WenZHeng:

Gud Idea!

Tim Granberg:

Best gag of the bunch!

Paul Wei:

Really cool concept. Some of the dad spider's movements could be more in sync with the dialogue, and the legs sometimes move a bit randomly without purpose.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

concept is great. you need to work Little bit on animation.

Frank G:

Nice story telling. Unique. I like the way the web moves in response to the son. Attention given to communicating the story idea may have limited the character animation.

Daniel Erwin:

thats cool!!! i love the spider webbing art... and it moved and felt spider webby when hes walking across it.... the dialogue action choices are fine but is animated too stiff... im not fond of how he's staged in the last shot, being croped... i would try to keep him on the left side of the screen more in both dialogue shots so there's more of a screen right, screen left, directing... that way on the second shot his head wont be cut off.

Giuseppe:

Too many lip sync shapes. But a very nice idea!

Sako Mahamadou:

very nice idea!!!!!!! ;)

Henk Kok:

well very fun reveal thats for sure, animation could improve though.

Matthew Murray:

cool story

Ronny:

nice concept if you had render this better probably will be more convincing, and I'm impressed with the way that you adjust generi rig

Renato Fochi:

Hahaha great!! i love it!

rajeshk:

idea is pretty good,
but lack clarity in representation... and ur animation is not selling it.

Though very nice effort.

Erik Griott:

haha, very funny. i only wish you started the dialog after the first cut.

Martin Silfvast:

a little bit stiff

David Jonson:

A man of great originality

Abraham Aguilar:

Verry original!

gerardo:

creative

Barnabas Boehler:

Wow! That's a really nice idea and rigs are unique too! Gotta give ya props for all around originality and i'm pretty sure this is one I'll remember for a long time.

Carol Cheng:

Nice idea! Timing and lip sync could be improved.

Andy Hass:

Ha ha. Finally a good use for that blue guy! Very creative. A little strange at the end when he goes out of frame. If you want him to start walking away, have him turn and go out in profile or away from the camera, just doesn't seem to be working having him come at the camera.

Ryan Chan:

Love the concept!

Chris Winstone:

Hahaha

Ryan Shannon:

hilarious, i chuckled out loud. unfortunately it may not be the best animated though. i like the overlapping action on the goatee. the movements are kinda stiff though and lip sync is a little rough.

great concept.

Jonathan Gonçalves:

hahaha great history

Mark Homoky:

Ah... this is why I love 11secondclub.com - it never ceases to amaze me some of the concepts people come up with :-D

Absolutely superb. I for one can't fault it (although the lighting could be a little brighter perhaps - but that's hardly anything to score against) I only wish the spiders in our garden were that clever.

Well done!

KristiC:

cute idea

E. Cooman:

Love the concept, nice and original. Good work.

Omri Navot:

funny. it's distracting to cut the character's face out of frame the way you do at the end.

Raasi N:

Very nice concept.
However,lot of potential to let father act throughout by changing different camera angles maybe so that father's animation is not reduced

Joan Delmont:

funny

Chad Swanson:

Lol Great idea. Love the characters and the Mona Lisa. The staging could use some work to show who's talking in the beginning and not having the father run out of the camera before hes done talking.

Ashwani:

nice

jonas ekman:

love the idea man!

Aziz Kocanaogullari:

great idea!

Thiago Calçado:

HAHA!!..great gag!!

James Fearn-Wannan:

Teehee

NY:

Very creative!