Matt Hirengen:

Nice job. good staging and acting. It just needs a bit more polish with more arcs and overlapping action.

luv2animate:

Nice one but I felt the showing of the drawing was forceful..

Sergey B.:

Hi, i think you should make hands not so stiff

Corey McDaniel:

Very very nice choices!!

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

Well done. the body movements were perfect. The face seemed a little stiff for the lip sync but on time. I thought it was great.

Daniel Erwin:

i like how he wipes off the drawing...

John Seldon:

i like the idea you just maybe need to add a bit of overlapping action with the arms cos they seem a bit stiff

Henk Kok:

Fun to watch, yet try to animate the subtext not the words. What is this guys motive and goal in the scene. Whats the thought behind the word.

Max Perelman:

Nice acting. Try to tighten up the lip sync a bit and watch the IK hands -- especially the repositioning on the painting.

Martin Silfvast:

good job!

Erik Griott:

i didnt get to see his finger because his hand gesture was placed right in front of it.

barak drori:

love the hand cleaning, nice touch

Jeff Simon:

good job

Ryan Shannon:

i like it. i wish the kids drawing was a little more obviously bad though. hand poses are a little stiff as well.

good job

Mark Homoky:

Wonderful. Imaginative and well executed idea.

Kevin Gittens:

The render quality of the shadows on the paper/canvas is a little distracting.

Frank G:

There's some nice spacing and timing going on here. Top marks. It's not really part of the voting, but I think this had a nice story.

Ashwani:

I like it good job

jonas ekman:

i like how you used the painting idea and how his hands worked with it..

Romain Digonnet:

I like the acting, very nice.
When he points to the painting, I feel something's not right, maybe his finger is too close to the painting.