July Entry Morrgan

Final Rating: 5.69. Finished: 9 out of 43 entries.
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Animator: Patrick

Description: first time i participate ... couldn't make as much time for this as i wanted, but it was a lot of fun nevertheless

Experience: not much

Time taken: many many many many many hours

Comments:

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Rich Lauzon:

Good expressions and reactions. A little bit floaty at the end.

P Walters:

Nice. This has really good blocking. It feels about 60% done. Just needs some spit and polish.

shamyl:

nice facial expressions and lipsyncing, they really have character

Jett Atwood:

It's coming but the poses are twinned and generic.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

The movements are way too fast. You need to work on the anticipation and follow through to make it less stiff. The poses are too obvious.

Steve Sloan:

Some of the facial expressions are good but the movement wasn't convincing for me.

Frank Collazo:

like it. the reaction of the yelow character at the end

Alonso Soriano:

decent, holds together fine. You need to loosen up some, more follow through and settle, everything feels a little pose to pose-y, hit and stick, offset and loosen up

C. J. Cow:

great animation IMO but maybe less twining with the arms?

miles southan:

Nce job! Here are some nitpicks: The fingers on the beige guy could be a little offset from each other. The timing on his arm motions is pretty twinned as well. His head and neck seem like they're operating in world space a little too independently of the body. Make sure they overlap accordingly. Dont forget to check the arcs on everything.

Missy Feaster:

Beautiful animation and clever gestures. Two things: careful of reusing hand-gestures, and make sure that your character (and audience) has time to register what he's seeing before he reacts (at the end).

Theo Edmands:

Nice rendering. The acting choices are really good as well.

Laban:

watch out for your twinning

Chris Smith:

The most accurate animation of what would MOST LIKELY be happening in this scene I've seen so far.
Acting is quite good, however, gestures are probably a little overdone, emphasising just a bit TOO much. Cut back a tad on those.
Otherwise, good effort.
I like the added touch of the right guy "thinking" first, hinting that he's already started pondering about the implications. (If that is, in fact, the effect you were after....)

Aaron Clement:

I love the shrug of the shoulders. Feels a little floaty in places. Watch twinning... The fingers need more animation on them... Be careful of cliche, also.

Chad Hannah:

Nice gestures

Justin Weg:

Watch out for the twinned pose at the end.

Taber Dunipace:

Very vaudeville. Some of the acting choices, especially due to their speed and suddenness, seem very unnatural. The animation quality is fair, but could use more contrast of fast vs slow movements.

Christopher Lutz:

Nice facial animation!

Bilal Ahmad:

a good effort, the grey GUY could've done a lot better on the last posture

Matt Garward:

Really nice acting on the pink guy... Love his little shrug, and the tongue as he opens the letter. Watch out for a bit of a feeling of floatyness in your moving holds (pink's elbows at the beginning, tan's whole pose after "all done"). Otherwise, really good work!

Gabe Dill:

i like it.. very believable "realistic" poses here

Gregory Marlow:

Pretty good. I like it.

Danny Garnett:

nice facial animation. some of the poses seem a little extreme. They could maybe be toned down to something a bit less exaggerated.

Freddy Burgos:

Very cool clip! I really like the fist pound part and how screen-right guy really looks like he's thinking hard about the whole thing. Really great ideas! One thing that stands out to me is that the envelope guy feels a bit stiff compared the the screen-right guy, especially during the part where he opens the envelope. Great job overall! Keep up the hard work!

Roshan.k:

a bit of twinning and some actions repeated..but i love the acting on their faces..nice job!

Christiaan Moleman:

Works well overall, but some of your acting choices are a bit on the theatrical and/or literal side, pointing at the envelope, hands out look of horror on the opening and the palms up "all done"

David Shum:

nice renders, ahha
where did u get that model!!

The animation is good overall,
only problem i felt is the head shake on yellow dude (frame 250s). I think you could've made it stronger with facial animation.

A head shake to me, feels more like a communication tool,-- to tell somebody else your dissaproval.

Anthony Travieso:

Cool stuff. The arms on the brown guy hit at the same time in many parts. I would try to break that up a bit.

Victor Wong:

2nd character has some twinning issues at the beginning, but otherwise it works. Good facial expressions on the first character.

Carlos Fins:

Guy on right has too many poses, I think. Expressions are veyr cliche-ish. Mechanics are good, tho.. good work. :)

Olivier Ladeuix:

nice work, maybe you could have led the motion with the wrist instead of the hand to open the letter

David J Harmon:

nice job but I think the one with the letter should say 'all done'

Mike Courtney:

Well done. The pink character doesn't seem to be effected by the situation in the beginning when he says, "We have to."

Emmanuel Vergne:

Careful about tweening ;)