In the Bathroom
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Mark Bogdanoff:
Why are they in a bathroom?
Rich Lauzon:
I like the Cartoony style. The Bunny ihas some really good reaction posses. The other character is good as well... maybe a bit of lip sync is off... but not by much.
Erik Griott:
interesting movement and characters. i think you can do without the part right before the dialogue, it is a little distracting to me.
David Humphreys:
the bunny man rules!
good expressions on the old dude
Brian Duffy:
really well animated, but it's pushed a bit too far. pay more attention to the tone of the acting rather than adding flourishes for the sake of flourishes
shamyl:
lots of details... maybe a little too much going on but very fluid overall
Jett Atwood:
It's fun but the characters are rather floaty and the dialogue is over done and mushy.
Steve Sloan:
I like the acting, some parts like the lip sync look a little floaty but that could be a style too.
Dave H Shovlin:
Nice work. The only thing I would do is make JackRabbit heavier. He seems to float in some places. Your poses are otherwise very strong and your arcs and settles are lovely.
P Walters:
Very nice. Nice cartoony feel.
Frank Collazo:
good lip sync a little of
C. J. Cow:
I'll never wash my eyes again! because i did this, lol. no, it still needs alot of work, but since its mine im giving it 2 thumbs up! XP
Marcos Borba Moreira:
strong poses, just thought the animation was to slow in some parts
Theo Edmands:
Your sense of lighting and rendering is very nice. The animation is a bit too soft in that it all feels a bit underwater.
Missy Feaster:
Hee hee, funny. Minor, minor timing tweaks could refine this, but it's a really nice piece of animation.
ed:
thats awsome jack,,,,,teach me your brain
Hector Lopez:
Good facial expressions. Mouth needs a little work.
Victor Wong:
Apart from the drifting eyebrows on the bunny, this is a good level of movement on the part of both characters. Nice character design too.
Justin Weg:
I like the rabbit!
Damodar V Sawant:
try to observe weight shifts in body
Bayu Sulistyo:
love the bunny animation
Taber Dunipace:
So... the guy hits the envelope and the bunny with the scissors? The acting choices and animation are too confusing for me to fully understand what's going on here.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Really nice job. The poses are great. Both characters move really nice. I like the main characters last moves a lot. Keep it up!
Christopher Lutz:
Nice animation. Rabbit's movements are not very clear.
Bilal Ahmad:
goood effort.
Brad Bradbury:
really think through the weight in the characters' hips when they go to take steps. It's very floaty now..
Alison K. Sanders:
You've got some nice stuff going on here, but I think your silhouettes could be more clear which would make the actions more easy to read.
Gabe Dill:
i think i like the little things you put on the beginning and end better than the actual clip itself. great work on the bunny.
Oliver Scott:
This is very nice! Looks a little floaty in places so i'd say it could do with more moving holds with less movement if you understand that??? i think a snappier style of animation would suit this better.
Gregory Marlow:
Very very nice. Lips sync is off though.
Chris Smith:
Not bad, but it was unclear at the start what the rabbit was doing - I thought my sound was broken...
Aaron Clement:
Nice. I sore your winning entry over at 'AnimWatch.com'... Congratulations on winning that round.
The staging is good here. The general movements feel good, although maybe things continue to move too much during the moving hold. The ending was good... but felt a little long... Not too bad.
David Shum:
haha strong poses, nice arcs.
Nice renders --
tho i didn't really get the story, :(
the bunny walk, he keeps walking with the foot he has his weight on. Feels awkward. But other than that, great piece!
Jennifer Blom:
Lip sync may have been a little off but other than that great job!
Carlos Fins:
The start of the rabbit is great. I like his dejected look and expressions. His steps feel weightless, though. Great final expression on the left guy. Nice work!
Olivier Ladeuix:
nice animation, not to sure about the acting. Make the subtext a bit clearer. What process of thought are the characters going through?
Adriel Restrepo:
Wow! Very nice work! I love the begining how you made him thinking and the way he says "All done." Great arcs and poses! They really stood just like your prepro. Keep it up!
Mike Courtney:
The lip-sync could be improved. When the human is holding his hands at the beginning, they shouldn't stay in the same world location all the time. Try implementing a moving hold.
Max Herzfeld:
I thought this was very well animated.
Keep up the good work
Christiaan Moleman:
I like your acting but you need to work on the weight of your characters. There's no anticipation, and it the momentum of the characters as they move (particularly the bunny) doesn't quite feel right.









Animator: C. J. Cow
Description: its been a humbling experience participating in this month's competition. thanks go to all of my friends who have given the time to kindly critique my piece and offered with their wisdom invaluable suggestions and pointers.
Experience: not a lot. im a rookie, still much to learn
Time taken: 2 weeks