When Jafar Jr. Meets Hades Jr.
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Ryan Lowe:
crazy idea. reads well though. flash animation can be horrible. this works however.
Erik Westlund:
Cute character setup in scenario although the 'vacation' gag isn't quite working. Anticipation into pose on "murder" is lost in silhouette that changes by getting smaller. Makes action mostly unreadable. Two hands in frame seems flat and hard to fallow.
Jon Houston:
good concept, but more follow through and secondary action
Mariah:
Cute idea! Would like to see more overlap on characters, instead of just mouth movement.
Ambuj:
:D
Ceno:
congratulations man!
James O'Neill:
The camera cuts are a bit confusing. I feel the piece could be powerful with just one camera angle. I would look out for twinning, maybe just offset one leg or arm by a few frames to loosen it up. I would like to see a few more breakdowns, some more anticipation, and follow through.
Russell:
The idea is interesting, but it took a few views to understand the gag. By having a gag at the end of the piece gives little time for it to settle and be read by the audience. If you have a gag, hit it about 3/4 of the way through, have a take/reaction, and then a settling. Tom and Jerry has this on lock.
Also, don't be afraid to draw in-betweens! Don't be too reliant on you character library, otherwise you will find yourself wanting a certain pose, but your character library doesn't have it, so you compromise your original idea because you didn't free yourself to draw the extra frames.
The upper jaw in lip sync should be stationary.
Joshua:
the dialog does not fit your choice of animation.
Stanley:
nice style and idea, but the timing of the lipsync is a little off
Lisa Taylor:
Nice style.
Sergey B.:
Funny :)
Tim W:
Very nice concept and I'm diggin' your style.
Avner Engel:
LOL !
Nice ending you have got there.
Mark Kennedy:
Simple, clear and well executed. Nice Work. However, being picky I would say that you needed another second for the gag at the end to read properly. There is no reason why you couldn't cut earlier from the dialogue to execute the gag clearer. Great stuff...
James:
A bit confusing staging-wise, but nice animation
Brian Boswell:
Needs more anticipation on the big movements.
chloé:
it's doesn't look finish.
Jorge Zagatto:
very funny!
Animator: Kent Wong
Description: Animation done in Flash. Character design and story plotting took me a while before I start the actual work. Unfortunately, the animation is not fully completed due to time constraint. Hope u enjoy what is done so far. =)
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: on and off within few weeks