ultimate espionage
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Zainab Siddiqui:
The movements really nice and smooth and the characters are really expressive
James Wilson:
poor george...!
Jean-Luc Delhougne:
Idea is cool, animation is working fine... But I miss some subtle moves that makes things come to life..
Mariah:
Nice idea, and background, but I don't like that the first character is off screen during his own line, and the lip sync seems off during the rest.
Paulo Cesar Biajante:
Good acting man!
David Walz:
thats good. completely orginal
Andy Wakeley:
Cool, really nice idea and some good poses in there. For me, some of the spacing could be a bit snappier on the accenting gestures to give it a little more life and weight. Good job!
sharad kumar:
lip sync???
Erik Westlund:
Murder? or Assassination? Maybe US President slumped over is a bit much, but the idea is a nice twist compared to some others I've seen. I like the conclusion on "...we got bupkis!" while indicating the laptop. Finger point on "cut a deal." seems forced. Screen left character signals thoughts of "espionage and murder" in space around him as if they are abstract ideas... meanwhile they are real and present in the shot. Good use of reversals but movements are a bit slow and smooth... perhaps not enough use of anticipations to build energy.
Koty Juliano:
feel like your slacking, there is no reason he should be off scene. pretty good though.
sean connolly:
really like the idea
Russell:
I like the concept!
At some points the spine and shoulders seem a little stiff.
James O'Neill:
I feel some poses are unnecessary, and other unclear. I would like to see more follow through. More eye brow emotion could really help as well.
jeff:
improve timing
Chris Brock:
like how the frist person walk into frame after he is done speaking the first line.....
Bill:
This one gets by on wish-fulfilment alone!
Lisa Taylor:
Really nice work. The only thing I would suggest is to be a little more ambitious with your posing. Really great stuff though, well done.
pep:
the setting is attractive, sucessfully grab some attention from me.
Pete Shand:
Solid animation, feels like it could use a little more polish/ subtle movement, nice setup, good job!
Paul Vicol:
That was really funny!
So the president died?
Hahahahah!
I mean, what a shame...
In any case, the acting was great, and I liked how the man on the right only came into the scene later.
The dead man's pose is good too, and I like how the man on the left is looking up stuff on his computer.
Adds some mystery to what he's doing!









Animator: sharad kumar
Description: access to the white house.
BG/Lighting: J. Aravind
Resources & facilities: Md.Jafar
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 10 days planning,1 day animating(..its wierd)