J K:

Great environment, I love the dead Doll ldea.

Lip syncing needs work.

Chan Ken Neth:

the lipsync need some major improvements, but great job with the idea of the story!

Mariah:

Great idea! Like the animation too! Just a little off on the lip sync though.

Ceno:

It very good camera positions!

Taber Dunipace:

Could use better acting, but strong overall. Consider taping yourself or others.

wei keong:

The couple in the background distraced me for a while, I would leave them out. The doll handling is well-posed and timed.

Michel Giguère:

Nice setup. Actors are believable and camera cuts are well done. It took me a couple viewings to read the trembling arm on "now", I think you could have add more body force to that pose. Also I would have liked more hip movements on both characters to bring more energy. Those are small things, you made a great clip.

Ken Rice:

Good animation, but the lip sync lets it down.

E. Cooman:

Could use a bit more detail, but verry nice! Keep on goin', you're on the right track! :)

JD van der Merwe:

Eyes don't seem to be looking in the right directions. Lip-sync needs a lot of work.

Erik Westlund:

Beautiful lighting... but that's OT. Funny setup with moms in background as 'the authorities.' Good use of line-of-action although I feel some poses could be pushed a little more, poses held slightly such as on "...the authorities." Lip-sync timing is a little off, slow, and mushy. Lacks energy of poses. Nice finish.

Koty Juliano:

cool models!

Marco Palmieri:

Seems like you spent more effort on the lighting than the animation. Get the animation right first then reward it with good lighting after.

Joshua:

Wonderful concept! The expressions could be pushed further and the lip sync is a bit off, but over all, you've done a nice job.

Russell:

I like this piece. The poses are good. The concept is solid. The biggest fault is the lip sync. It needs a lot of work.

James O'Neill:

The poses are a bit unclear, I want to see more emotion, or clearer emotion. I would like to see more exaggerated facial expressions too, I feel a lot of the face is unmoving, maybe animate the cheek area a bit more.

Lisa Taylor:

Nice work. I like the idea.

Romain Digonnet:

Nice idea.
Pretty good animation (even though there's a problem on the "great" form the right character with his hand).
The lipsinc doesn't seem right though.

Jose Stricklin:

Good animation overall, although there a certain level of "alive" that is lacking. The lip sync is a little off as well, but the execution was good throughout.

Sam Caudill:

good concept!

Avner Engel:

Nice idea!

Ken Vass:

LESS TIME RENDERING MORE TIME LIP SYNCHING

David Ruzicka:

the faces are too stiff