Daniel Huertas:

the guy looks floaty.. you could have "cheat" that long moving hold by adding an extra camera for the lady and then going back to him...

Tim Nowak:

I like this. Its a simple animation.

Tyson Ibele:

This one is OK....the last action of the woman doesn't seem right to me....also, most of the lip sync seemed off....but I liked the poses on the male character.

Erik Westlund:

In places you got some nice acting going on here. Seated character is very believably involved in her work. Nice change in her focus to the interruption. Her question, "a fruit cake?" is full of attitude. Starts to loose steam after that. Male character eyes communicate embarrassment but his eyebrows and body pretty much the same as before. Clarity of posing is lost on female character at the end.

Frank G:

I liked it. Nice line of action in the poses. Well framed. I wonder if he could have retreated a half pace back from his starting position for better effect?

Chris Sacco:

I really like the teachers movement as she gets up.

Taber Dunipace:

The motion is very soft and floaty, a hallmark of incomplete CG animation. Try to work on your timing and inbetweens.

Sunny Kharbanda:

I like the simple approach. Also nice work on her getting up before her last line! His step back after placing the cake needs some work.. looks off balance.

Mason Saucier:

I like the subtlety of the sound cue with her putting her hand on the desk, very nice!

sharad kumar:

she could've looked to the cake once again towards the end of the dialogue..

Katy Lambourne:

Very solid effort - you got some great principles applied here, just a couple of things need tidying up. The reaction of Mrs Munchnic seems a little overdone, it could have worked even better if you worked more on a subtle reaction. Well done though!

Mat Brady:

I just love the goofiness of these characters. This makes me laugh. :)

Eduardo Cavalcante Komaba:

help me!!

Joe Jacob:

Love the head movements on Mrs. Munchnik(sic).

killdom:

cheer up

danyeal:

how can she know that, she didn even look

Dan Harriman:

This is quite nice! There are only a few things I noticed. The guy is "frozen" for a bit at the very start. Also the lip syncing of the "remarkably..." phrase, doesn't look right. And her final pose silhouette doesn't read very well. But other than that I think this one hits the mark closer than any others I've seen so far!!

David Andrade:

The composistion is good, but al l3 lines leading onto him fight my eyes to watch HIM more than i watch her, even when she talks. So I really miss waht she says

The acting feels very much the same, I can't totally read their attitudes. But I love her ending gestures there. Good Effort :)

Jason Smith:

I love his facial animation. Her head seems too 'bobble-y' when she's saying 'remarkably like the...' Overall great job though.

Aaron Clement:

I felt this one was too wiggly... Needed more body controle. Try adding more weight as well... On the plus side, your staing worked for me.

selvaraj:

good animation

Julianne McCartney:

HA! The woman character has great movements. The expressions of both characters really follows the dialog well without being over the top.