Hernán Bruna:

Very good expressions!

Daniel Huertas:

check your timing on your accents and poses.. you don't need to hit every pose in every word.. but also you don't need to offset it so much it doesn't look right... try to find the balance and you will have a nice shot.. there is also an arm pose that floats to the next pose in the blue guy... keep it up.

Tyson Ibele:

I like the composition of the shots, and thought that the characters emoted rather well. However, I found that the lip sync was off for the most part, and the initial hand gestures of the blue character didn't read very well (at least for the dialogue).

Erik Westlund:

Blue character is believable, more so than seated character. Blue character is empathetic/convincing. Seated character gestures read mostly as masculine until the end. Both need more contrast and reversals. Table prop is appropriate "barrier" symbol but fruit cake is completely out of scale and unconvincing.

Chris Sacco:

The opening take the woman makes where she drops her arms is a bit jerky

Taber Dunipace:

The timing could use improvement, it feels monotonous right now.

Frank G:

It might be good to still have the bck of him in shot at the end.

sharad kumar:

u need to make better acting choices...and a better cake too.

Henning Koczy:

Her hands at 75 and at 140 and the grab at 110 seem unmotivated and sudden. They don't necessarily HAVE to move, you know...
The last hundred frames are priceless.

Muhammad Azhari:

need pose & timing correction. good job :)

Mat Brady:

Tried to fit too much in.

Anirudh:

guys hand floating when it comes down and both hands moving at the same time.

HARISH:

the male characters lower body looks locked in the first cut . u could also throw in some good poses .

Aaron Clement:

I like her expression at the end. Maybe a white shader on the cake would go down a lot better. A bit floaty in places... The ending was good... but was a bit slow.

Imus zai:

the women's mouth needs to close at the end! good try!

deenad:

good effort

Lisa Taylor:

I think you're lip sync maybe off by a few frames. Good attempt though, just needs a bit of refining.