Nick Malutama:

Keep working , u're getting there!

Mark McDaniels:

Looks like Barry B. Benson's dad in Bee Movie. The part where he's talking about not going into honey.

Blaine Toderian:

I like the acting ideas you have here; it needs to be pushed a little further. He hardly moves his body and head, and you can really punch 'todas' with a strong anticipation.

Alonso Soriano:

I like how he tears out that Idiota. Not enough variety in line of acttion and poses to suggest changes of thought and emotions.

Kensaba:

You should push the gestures a bit more... Choosing a calm personality you limit this shot a lot. The audio ask for more power acting, listen it again and you will agree that he is almost p**** off. Keep going

Rachel G.:

Having him push his glasses up was a very nice touch. Good job with the lipsynching as well.

Eric:

Good overall, adding some more work in his head/eye movement may make it pop a bit more.

Brad Regier:

Nice acting. The glasses add personality. "Todas" could be punchier.
Good work.

David Higgins:

There was no real show of emotion - it was very 'matter of fact'

Thomas Dumont:

Good animation. Bad framing.

rob eddy:

i like it, but for 'TODAS', which i think was 'all of it' or 'all of them' he looks up. is he referring to the documents he was just reviewing? i thought he'd gesture towards the papers on the desk. good stuff, 145 on looks really nice

Dane Winn:

i liked this one, but i think you need to re-consider the camera view, get in tighter to the character, a lot of empty space above him

Ashley Stringer:

great work, i like the interaction with the paper at the start as well as the interaction with the glasses.

well done

Mark Wheeler:

Seems the chair swivels more than his actual weight swivels.

David Shum:

Rule of thirds.
You'll find that your shot will have alot more appeal if you have a strong camera set up. Make the most out of the effort you've already put into your animation :D

Ryan Chan:

great job!

Yasmin:

Nice subtle glasses gesture.