Culpable

Final Rating: 4.51. Finished: 21 out of 82 entries.
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Animator: Mark Wheeler

Description: A character aggressively expresses his thoughts about a courts verdict.

Experience: two years

Time taken: approximately 36 hours

Comments:

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Brad Bradbury:

add more overlap into your hand gestures. there isn't a reason for the hand to go exactly 90 degrees like on frame 147.

Mark Persson:

Nice work! Good movement, good expressions. but needs some more work with the face and lipsync. The character needs more expressions when he is screaming.

Rachel G.:

The lighting is really well done in this one. I also feel like the movements are all character-motivated. Nice work.

Jonay O. Urbina:

I think the arms don't fit with what is saying on the second half of it. I really like how he turns on the chair

Augusto Goicoechea:

Ilike very much the acting, and good timing too!

Carlos Chavez:

the camera could be closer..

Martin Silfvast:

nice acting choices! very nice!

KISHORE:

i like the acting choices love the anim too

Andrew Harding:

Fluid movement throughout, I like that.

Rick Benz:

I really liked it though, I would of liked to see maybe a bartender sense you have a bar scene.

Ashley Stringer:

wow really well animated well done.

Alonso Soriano:

more flow through the poses

Juan Calderon:

the lip sync is a little off the performance is getting there. I feel that the exit he does at the end was a little awkward, maybe you shouldn't have him walk away, because it cuts away from his anger and frustration, it's like he's afraid. Keeo him in the scene and have himend angry

Ryan Chan:

nice gestures and acting choices.

Jorge Zagatto:

Good acting solutions!

Nicola:

A nice match, but needs more expression in the face.

rob eddy:

looks good, great interaction with the bar and the stool