Nick Malutama:

The end is great! Wish it was that dynamic from the get go.

Juan Calderon:

suggestion work on giving characters blinking it creates more reality. also work on development of the characters performance and gestures. lip sync is good at the beginning but it falls behind at the end. Keep at it, you'll improve overtime

Sean Thorpe:

twining the arms

Rachel G.:

I love the use of lighting in this one. The hand expressions are really great, as well, but I think you can still pull more from the face. Watch that last position. It looked a little "planned" rather than organic.

Ashley Stringer:

love the first pose the character is making before he starts talking but after that the poses are almost all twins, try not to do twinning as it looks to unnatural.

Spencer Barber:

I think you might have over done it on the arm waving

Martin Silfvast:

Nice poses, but it looks a little bit too linear between the poses.

Yuriko:

Good!
But his right hand flat too long in first part.
And try to emphasize "golden" poses. Now its too uniform.

rob eddy:

looks good, just as the arms are slightly offset around frames 157-160 (right arm arrives later than left) maybe offset the arms around 190 and again maybe offset around 215.

Johnne Tyson:

The opening moment doesn't work with this.

Dane Winn:

avoid twinning, don't allow yourself to create symmetrical poses, you need to position the arms in different places to make the character more believable, read shawn kelly's tips and tricks he goes into this in much more detail

Mark Wheeler:

Extend some of the still poses, character moves around a lot. Difficult to see some sip sync and facial expressions because of character turning from camera, hands and arms obstructing the view from camera.

Alonso Soriano:

ew, looks like he's touching his eyeball
a little too much gesturing with the hands
bring in a little more of the body, it's not very expressive right now.
watch your silhouette's the hands are getting lost near the end because they're in front of the body

David Thomson:

Its Great.

Chase Shields:

Very good.

I think this is a great start but just needs a little more. The acting is finished in my opinion. Maybe adding another character or change the scene.

But all around its finished! Great!

Ivan:

need improvement

Arief Leuvenardi:

Eyes animation is quite good but you need some work on the body and lip-synch.