August Competition
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Andrew:
lol, nice interpretation.
Nick Malutama:
Mhh not sure about this one...
Blaine Toderian:
The main character is lacking weight in his movements; when slugs the wall there is no feeling of force at all. He seems disconnected from what he is saying compared to what he is acting
Salvador García Luque:
Excellent animation, the only thing I don't get is the very last part when the blonde guy jumps off
Ashley Stringer:
the cheeky little smile at the end got a little laugh out of me, well done trust me thats a hard thing to do with me :)
would have liked to see a little more emotion in the second character though when the first guy pee's on him as he would be angry or surprised and look down at what has happened.
well done.
Andrew Harding:
The second character's movement (the yellow-haired dude) needs a bit more attention towards the end. In the beginning, there's overlap on him and his movements flow, but then he seems to get a bit robotic after frame 140 (his body doesn't even sway after that point until frame 160).
Mark Persson:
He he... Nice characters. Original!
The characters needs more work though...
Keep up with the good work!
/Marq
brandonbeckstead:
Otto's smile at the end kinda kills it for me, seems really unnecessary.
Chase Shields:
HAHA!
I loved this one. I like the way that the blue guy went. I would like to see in my opinion more sharp or harsh movements (not blocky).
Very funny in the end! Great idea!
David Shum:
wish i could see the characters' faces!
Maybe try shooting the shot from the other side?
Alonso Soriano:
what's with that smile at the end?
I don't feel the impact of the hit on Todas
interesting idea, but I think it lead to a poor staging choice where we can't see their faces for most of it (also kind of looks like the big guy is passing a kidney stone)
slim is too still
Juan Calderon:
hahahahha,yeah I get this one, but the animation performance neds work, along with the lip sync it's off
rob eddy:
funny idea. lip sync looks a little off in the second half
Andy Bewernick:
Dude I would be so creeped out had that happened to me.









Animator: Jorge Mántaras
Description: Mhhh, I know it needs more polish but I run out of time so I uploaded what I had so far. I hope you enjoy it.
Experience: No experience
Time taken: 30Hs