Brad Bradbury:

I love the hair.
This could still use some smoothing...

Matt Hirengen:

the first hand drop is too fast.

rob eddy:

looks good, really like the shake after todas, and hand interacting with the desk is really nice. his left hand looks a little floaty at the start. good stuff

Alonso Soriano:

I like the todas gesture. Big IK magnet like pop to the counter. Overall it feels a little ham acting, like he's making big gestures to show off, not because that's what comes out as he tries to explain what he's feeling. And the walking off dismissively doesn't feel like it fits with the emotion in the voice.

Rachel G.:

I love the passion on "todas." That really resonates well. Nice job.

Augusto Goicoechea:

...I like, good details in the animation!

Taber Dunipace:

BELT BUCKLE!

Dane Winn:

this still needs another pass, but i really like what you've got, maybe check the arcs and curves, but just polishing, the poses are great, maybe add more movement to the left arm, i alos love what you've done to moom lol

Ashley Stringer:

very dynamic and a great show of power in some of the poses

well done

Ivan:

the animation isnt that smooth

David Shum:

First stagger I see in this months competition!
And I like it!

Careful with the hands rolling off the edge there (frame 32). The hand looks very stiff, and it kinda flies thru frame. It was a little distracting.

Keep up the good work!

Juan Calderon:

frame 32 to 36 the hand moves to fast, the keys need to be stretched out a little and frame 158 to 160 his hands also move to fast.
I like the follow through on frame 127, how his fist has a movement of up and down, purty smooth. HIs performance need to be more up and down, his waist stays in one place he should move to the left a little and right and then forward etc.

Chris Wong:

I don't think the movement is smooth enough.

Salvador García Luque:

this one is good but there is something in the fluency I don like.

Eric Huelin:

Strange effect with this model, when the fist is clenched shrinks in size. This is nit picky but when you say "all of them!" a clenched fist would not be my first choice.

Sunny Kharbanda:

I like that you're trying to keep it subtle. But unfortunately, some of the poses ended up looking cliche and "animatey".

Mel Gonzalez:

Good start. Solid beginning. However, the acting is not selling the emotion and the audio quite so much. In the audio he is on the defensive and sounds annoyed. At the end of your shot he walks off dejected and its not quite what I feel from the actor's voice and audio. If he walks away at all, he should be walking away insulted and a little angry