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Animator: Damien Pougheon

Description: visit to the doctor

Experience: some years

Time taken: few hours scattered during idle time

Comments:

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Max Perelman:

Great job! I don't think the tail-end after the audio is necessary, tho'.

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Michael Van Alstine:

Good job getting him back in the
chair.

Cole Higgins:

its good acting but he feels to stiff. I dont really feel any wieght in his body as he moves about. It would be nice to work with his hips a little more so that you get some more realistic wieght. Good job though. I like the ending how he falls back in the chair.

Virgil Tanasa:

i like the end part the most :)

andyM:

i like the way he gets back onto the chair, about 80frames too long...needlessly

Pete Shand:

fall of the hand at 120 needs its timing altered. otherwise nice work :)

shankar:

nice animation

Sean Hannon:

good movement overall, but little appeal in the action... kind of ordinary and predictable.

Sergey B.:

nice work :D i love his arm :D

Erik Westlund:

Nice demonstration of weight in arm/wrist and in returning to chair. Extended performance after audio seems unnecessary.

Marco Palmieri:

Don't need the end bit. just cut on the gag, it's funnier. lip sync need swork. Not bad animation though. Keep it up :)

Enrico Fioretti:

good timing!

Carl Bérubé:

I really like your animation. It's clear, simple, and overall really polished. But I don't think the ending is necessary.

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Very nice, staging is near perfect would track the camera a bit closer to the should of nearest character. Good solid animation.

cheers
/ Chris

nadja kapeller:

i like the way he is getting back on the chair...

Shannon:

Great overall, but it could use a little bit of snappiness to balance out those very smooth tangents and arcs.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

It's very smooth !

thomas reardon:

At the end make more instant eye contact between the characters. remember he is embarrassed.

Ben Crouse:

pretty solid overall! i think the bit at the end without audio is the strongest in the scene.
Crit - some minor lip sync problems with the "occasionally go to sleep" line.

Amdbcg:

lip syncing a problem ... good secondary animation...
and... audio sync works good animation curves too - feels natural

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