Heath problem?
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Max Perelman:
Great job! I don't think the tail-end after the audio is necessary, tho'.
Mike Courtney:
nice work
Michael Van Alstine:
Good job getting him back in the
chair.
Cole Higgins:
its good acting but he feels to stiff. I dont really feel any wieght in his body as he moves about. It would be nice to work with his hips a little more so that you get some more realistic wieght. Good job though. I like the ending how he falls back in the chair.
Virgil Tanasa:
i like the end part the most :)
andyM:
i like the way he gets back onto the chair, about 80frames too long...needlessly
Pete Shand:
fall of the hand at 120 needs its timing altered. otherwise nice work :)
shankar:
nice animation
Sean Hannon:
good movement overall, but little appeal in the action... kind of ordinary and predictable.
Sergey B.:
nice work :D i love his arm :D
Erik Westlund:
Nice demonstration of weight in arm/wrist and in returning to chair. Extended performance after audio seems unnecessary.
Marco Palmieri:
Don't need the end bit. just cut on the gag, it's funnier. lip sync need swork. Not bad animation though. Keep it up :)
Enrico Fioretti:
good timing!
Carl Bérubé:
I really like your animation. It's clear, simple, and overall really polished. But I don't think the ending is necessary.
nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:
Very nice, staging is near perfect would track the camera a bit closer to the should of nearest character. Good solid animation.
cheers
/ Chris
nadja kapeller:
i like the way he is getting back on the chair...
Shannon:
Great overall, but it could use a little bit of snappiness to balance out those very smooth tangents and arcs.
Nicolas Fourcroy:
It's very smooth !
thomas reardon:
At the end make more instant eye contact between the characters. remember he is embarrassed.
Ben Crouse:
pretty solid overall! i think the bit at the end without audio is the strongest in the scene.
Crit - some minor lip sync problems with the "occasionally go to sleep" line.
Amdbcg:
lip syncing a problem ... good secondary animation...
and... audio sync works good animation curves too - feels natural










Animator: Damien Pougheon
Description: visit to the doctor
Experience: some years
Time taken: few hours scattered during idle time