Emmanuel Vergne:

i like the rhythm of the fall.
Nice animation

Ryan Lowe:

Great lip sync on this one!

Mike Courtney:

nice work

adolfo:

the first part is actually nice, but the rest in genneral is quite even in time and poses could be stronger.

Cole Higgins:

yeah that was great though I felt that he really wasnt engaging the audinence. I think hes talking to me as an audience member but it almost feels like your werent really sure your self. Is he talking to me or someone in a seat thats close to me. if he talking to me then really talk to me if its some one in a seat thats close to me them make it really clear. Its a nice piece. Very well done..

andyM:

pretty good.
room for improvement on the fall

Pete Shand:

nice fluid animation!

Sean Hannon:

Really good feel for flowing action, it could do with more specificity in where he's looking, and some changeup in timing of flowing motion for variety.

Mark Persson:

Good idea, acting and character movement! Good camera angle!

The lipsync needs to be little bit polished.

Keep up with the good work!D

Erik Westlund:

Simple staging is working. Nice arc into accent on "occasionally". Needs a little more contrast in narrow/wide shapes for mouth on "And you want to call it...". Like the books flying up and rattle of other props.

Jr Prez:

nice start but we don't see anything after the fall except for the arm

Marco Palmieri:

nicely animated. good staging but I feel it needed to be snappier when he say's "oh". good work though.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the mouth shapes look alittle funny. pretty good animation though

Nate Lane:

Sweet man. My only crit would be that when he says "whoa" for the first time the mouth should really reflect his surprise, maybe open it a bit slower, starting with a "W" shape and ending in the "A" shape. Other than that I really like this shot! Keep it up :D

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

The animation is fluent and clean but you need serious work on the lip-sync. Also the eyebrows is quite distracting, I know you're probably looking for flowlines and nice reversals but it's used a bit much. But the body animation is top-class.

cheers
/ Chris

Shannon:

Beautiful work on the hands.

Janarthanan:

a bit floaty..

Bruce Spike:

I liked it a lot. Just want better lip-sync and explore more options with the hand-only gag in the end.

Kevin Adams:

work great, some nice animation

Mike Mele:

Pretty good, add some stronger accents where needed.

thomas reardon:

Show us more of his arm giving out. It is a bit hidden when he turns.

Ben Crouse:

love the facial expressions happening in this one

Peter Satera:

Really nice body movement, especially when he stops right before his fall. I like it, however his eyes are devoid of subject, he really needs to speak to a someone and direct the line to somebody, even if they are off camera. His eyes don't sell to me who the line should be delivered to. Apart from that, I really like the motion.

=D

Amdbcg:

great! need some more animation on the fall!