Chris Niewinski:

I would keep the camera where it is. The zoom in is distracting.

Pete Shand:

Love it, simple but nice

Daniel Huertas:

nice JRA thumbnails... i would add a spine reversal in the fall though...

nice job

thomas reardon:

Good acting......make his arm give out more before he falls.

eleazermunoz:

frame 33-35 I think there is something wrong with the hand movement.

Marco Palmieri:

nice use of 2D. the gag needs to be clearer. maybe he's not behind a bar but beside so we see his legs.

Omri Navot:

Nice start. Keep working to bring in more details which will make your animation more alive.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

thats good.. but he rocks his head side to side alittle too much

Javier Vazquez:

lovely performance, i like this style and medium. good job

Mike Courtney:

lip-sync needs work

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Ease the mouth a bit, it goes like Chris Tucker on crack, otherwise very good animation..
/ Chris

Kevin Adams:

Very refreshing to see some traditional work, great effort!

Patricia Ross:

Nice work! Great acting and movement!

Cole Higgins:

nice effort. Try and push more animation like poses in there. Like if you were to freeze a frame anywhere in this animation would the pose be interesting or confusing. Try and get those really nice key poses in there so that the animation is brought up to not only a more grafically pleasing look but the emotions are bigger and more clear as well.

Amdbcg:

Nice! how'd you process these frames? they look awesome!

Erik Westlund:

Lots of nice energy and reversals in line of action to be found in the first part of this performance. Accent on "and YOU want call it..." works although use of foreshortening for this doesn't seem like the best way to hit that note. Not sure what alternative is available considering your staging. Camera move at the end shows off some solid drawing ability.