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Animator: Shayne

Description: You meet such interesting people on the subway...

Experience: 4 years of school

Time taken: 20 hours give or take

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ryan Sowiak:

that was so great! good job!

Emmanuel Vergne:

Funny idea.
But once he's on the floor he doesn't react at all whereas we could expect him to find a way to move despite his handicap (like when he's holding himself to the bar at the beginning of the shot)

Mike Courtney:

good job

Ken Rice:

This was funny - subtle stuff.

Renaud Déchaux:

Great Idea, good animation!
Very good job!!!

Michael Van Alstine:

Good work on the silent second
character, wanted to see a mid shot
of the first character.

Cole Higgins:

wow creapy, poor girl. All the acting is really reserved. Like the girl could be pushed so much more in terms of expressions and sheer emotions. and the guy could be way more awkward and strange. Its a really nice concept and has a nice finished feel to it. Keep going.

Virgil Tanasa:

nice, perhaps the secondary character could have shown a little more surprise when the guy has fallen, perhaps keeping a pose for a bit longer before moving a seat to the right. the lipsync seems to have some problems.

Bob Dole:

that was his right arm, not his left.

Pete Shand:

great work! i really felt it when he hit his head on the pole, and the scared girl is very convincing

Javier Vazquez:

hohooo!! that hurts!! beatifull fall :D, nice idea

Senthilnathan D:

wow. really i am like the work....

Sean Hannon:

Love the second character! Great action on the fall.

Mark Persson:

Good idea, acting, movement! The second character have a perfect acting and movement!

You could zoom in a bit, think that would make it better. Cant see the lipsync from this point.

Keep up with the good work!D

Erik Westlund:

Nice alternative to the standard "medical" scenario. Anyone who has ridden the subway knows about difficult and awkward interactions between people in public. Head bump on pole has the requisite violence to make it seem painful. Last pose on floor lacks weight in the lower half of the character.

Marco Palmieri:

not bad. cant help but not believe the relationship between the characters. She seems like a stranger. Also he's holding on with his right arm! not his LEFT arm! oops!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

i like this one.. definitly one of the best.. the fall needs work.. butt they are so in character.. reminds me of the old days in san francisco.. bart station baby..

Nate Lane:

haha i love the reaction of the girl. Very nice work indeed! keep it up!

Chris Peters:

I think screen R char is well thought out acting wise. a little light on the seat shift though. The fall is too slow and misses the audio. Good work.

Omri Navot:

funny.

Kevin Edzenga:

I love the girls eyes near the end.

nadja kapeller:

i specialy like the action of the girl :)

Maya K:

Great idea and setting!

Shannon:

Nice play on the dialogue. Love the work with the secondary character. The hit is a little soft.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Great secondary animation

Janarthanan:

good work..but the guys body is too much ruberry or i don kno exactly..something is happening at his chest part while saying "u want to call it a health problem"and the girl looks good ..cool reactions

raman:

get a concept man..!!!

girl should try to help the man to get up then he should say no i can get up...

better luck next time dude

James Fearn-Wannan:

Ah wonderful !

And he even looks a bit like Tobias..

Adriano:

Funny! I've enjoyed it!

Mike Mele:

Awesome, I love how you captured the awkwardness of riding a subway train. :D

Ben Crouse:

Doesn't look perfectly timed with the audio, but I like the action!

Peter Satera:

The motion of the characters are really nice. I like how she reacts to him, however it would be nice if she got a shock when he fell, really show some speed in there with a fright. His head bounces a little too much off the poll. Like dropping a bowling ball on the ground. Steel and the skull may have the same sort of mechanics, and may work a bit nicer.

Excellent all rounder though. I like it!!

Amdbcg:

funny way of riding the subway , but I like it :) it works :)

jamil:

entertaining..

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