Gregory Marlow:

Way too many poses in the first half.

Mike Courtney:

the arm that stops to droop is his right arm, and it's the left that goes to sleep

Cole Higgins:

It look like his frame rate is faster than the dialogue. He is going in fast motion. That or he just moves from one pose to the next really really fast. Take some poses out, he doesnt need to accent every word he says witha hand gesture.

Andrew Linke:

little jumpy at the beginning

Paul Naas:

A little too snappy, and the fall didn't look believable. But good poses and nice resolution.

Mark Persson:

Ok acting, but it needs more work!

Keep up with good work!

Miroslav Maletic:

looks good.
But what I don't like is that there's a many parts that are not quite clear to me..One of them is falling part.I don't understand what made him fall.
And I think you need to add much more ease in and ease out,everything is fast and looks like it has no anticipation.

Jr Prez:

you know, there's something wrong with your pelvis. your character get up fastly which gives him a momentum that you didn't take care, by stopping the forward movement, a bit of overshoot could help

eleazermunoz:

hands movements are a bit to fast

Marco Palmieri:

Moves too fast between poses. Moves more like a bird. You have to have some more weight in the motion. and the expression are not really pushed enough. keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

too many poses.. it makes the animation look messy.. especially at the end with the hand gestures.. but other then that.. good stuff..

Nate Lane:

sweet man! I like the snappiness to it. However I think that the pose with his hands on his knees doesn't really fit it. Keep it up!

Shannon:

He freezes a bit in his key poses. Also, look into breaking down some of the twinning in the arms.

thomas reardon:

The hand slipping off the desk is a good idea. The hand gestures at the end though seem too staged.

Ben Crouse:

may be a bit too snappy in the timing from pose to pose...

Amdbcg:

sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio
but good curves on your animation :)