Mike Courtney:

build up some anticipation for the fall

sharad kumar:

good stuff!....but u missed the falling part..i think he falls and the sound effects say that he is tumbling over a lot...but in ur case he jus falls once.

Ian Johnston:

Good effort. Keep an eye out for the character's center of balance and where his weight lies. In the last pose for example, his upper body looks centered when it is being supported primarily by the right arm, etc. . .

Mark Persson:

Good basic acting and movement! Good character drawing!

Hmmm... yes... you have the most basic movement here, but it need some more work on it.

Keep up with the good work!D

Marco Palmieri:

not sure if the look is intentional, but it ends up hiding the animation too much. Need a clean-up stage. Keep it up. Go 2D!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

you need to polish your lines.. its so distracting.. good arcs.. even though theyd move for no reason.. the fall looks good.. he is also pretty stiff..

BigZ:

nice lipsync.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

May be more moving hold help your animation to be less static

Christopher Pelloux:

Good lipsync

Cristin McKee:

Nice! I really like the dangle animation on the arm and the restrained acting, not too posey. Though at the end I'd like to see his body adjust a little instead of freezing.

JAEHYUN PARK:

Nice Lip Sync!!!

Mike Mele:

Drawings need a lot of cleaning up, more interaction with the other body parts, the arm cant move without interaction from the body, etc.

douglas anderson:

I like the style with all the lines, but it gets hard to see at his arm move at first. I really like the expressions, and the fall looks great.

Peter Satera:

It's good work! I would like to see some body movement though to really sell the line. Not just while he falls, but when he speaks through out. Really show his involvement and thought in what he is saying while he says it.

Good stuff though!