Mitchell Kirkpatrick:

Seems like a good start. I definitely understand the time-crunch for getting the motion smoother.
It's a little weird that he's talking while biting an apple. There's no pause to chew or swallow, and it's a bit of a stretch to imagine the dialogue with apple in his mouth. Since the apple is a decent prop for the character, maybe just imply the bite with a bite mark, and keep the apple in his hand like he's in the middle of eating it when he stops to regale about the quote. He also just stands up with stiff legs and back, without any body-weight changes. He should hoist his weight with some anticipation and body roll.

Alex Mey:

The pose and gestures are good. The character movement needs a lot of added anticipation and follow through action to bring out subtleties of human behavior and motion.