Gabriel:

watch your arcs!
moving holds have too much movement....

Elizabeth:

The cupcake made me laugh! The animation itself felt a little disconnected, however. For example, the arms seemed to be moving independently from the rest of the body, and the blinks are way too fast.

Ian Alexander Hanson:

I like the table shaking, and the cupcake reveal is very funny. Characters quite stiff in the spines and arms move without proper lead from the rest of the body. Hard to tell where the focus is, as both characters tend to be in constant movement.

Not bad!