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To Marty's Surprise

by Joshua Hunt

Final Rating: 2.94. Finished 141 out of 164 entries.

340 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Joshua Hunt

Description: I am currently taking animation classes at The Digital Animation and Visual Effects School

Experience: 3 months

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Nicole Brettell:

Expressions don't match the dialogue... "Needs a little more kick!". And Where is Doc?

Jamal Pollack:

feels floaty and weightless

Ian Alexander Hanson:

Not a bad framing, could move the window so I see more clearly what's outside. Need to use full body, even in sitting (esp. hips). Spine stiff, change / reaction at the end are not really strong enough.

Michael Kristiansen:

way to low profile. extreme it more. looks stiff and dead.

Tyson Haeh:

characters acting doesn't mach the dialogue