Final Rating: 4.83. Finished 55 out of 229 entries.

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Animator: Petroc Menuhin

Description: London - the not too distant future...
Transport has evolved and the underground is abandoned.
Two intrepid lawyers seek some thrills on a Friday night!

Experience: This is my first 3d animation finished from start to finish

Time taken: A couple of weeks

Comments:

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Rachel Stuart:

Good use of the environment and set up for the dialogue. The dialogue however I did struggle to follow along with it on occasion, like when the character turns his head away from the camera. Perhaps a less harsh turn for that character would have helped. Good job though!

Conway Dobbs:

the guy walking walks too slow and the guy who moves in moves in too fast and then moves around the frame too slowly but the story is quite clear and the set in nice. Good job.

luke foster:

I would prefer having the arms on the hips? make the eyebrows angry when he says no when history Fights Back