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Animator: Maciej Marucha

Description: A men in the form of ghost talk about his past life

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 16 hours

Comments:

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Richard Adams:

Love the idea you picked, and how you rendered this. Animation is pretty decent, too. Not great, but good. Lip syncing needs more work to get the mouth shapes right.

Rhys Davey:

Best advice I can give you is use FK arms for basic acting.
There's a lot of wrist breaking and at time the elbows and shoulders are moving independently.

Anna M.:

So in my opinion, the camera work is distracting. I feel like you were changing cameras for no particular reason. When you change cameras it takes a good 5-10 frames to refocus your eyes and figure out what is happening. Since there were 3 camera changes that is 15-30 frames where the audience is not seeing your animation but is instead refocusing their eyes. Try only using camera changes when there is a clear reason for it. Try not to change the camera while your character is in the middle of transitioning from one pose to the other. In this way, we will be able to clearly see what the character is doing and the wonderful animation that you spent so much time on. Let your animation shine.

(P.S. Really cool effect that you gave to Snow:)