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office conversation

by Denilson

Final Rating: 3.50. Finished 150 out of 195 entries.

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Animator: Denilson

Description: office lady talking to her friend

Experience: +- 1 year

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Alyssa P:

Cute expressions! I think this could use some work though.
A lot of the mouth shapes are not matched or timed properly with the dialogue clip. Also, a lot of this animation could be retimed, as I find the character really quickly moving from pose to pose in an unnaturally fast way. There should be some contrast between fast and slow movements.