Comments:
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Kyra Simone:
You pushed these poses a lot and that's good! Now it's time to focus on smooth transitions between them, and holding long enough for them to read.
LiLiPoofz:
Interesting, I was missing the arms at the very beginning. Some of the body movements didn't make sense to the sound bite. The end could have been more exaggerated.
Animator: J. Miguel Gonzalez
Description: One kid talking
Experience: 15
Time taken: 8 hours