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Learning the hard way

by sero

Final Rating: 3.85. Finished 115 out of 149 entries.

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Animator: sero

Description: Just practicing a little

Hope you're all well!

Experience: basically none

Time taken: about 1 1/2 days

Comments:

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Jennie:

270 - good eye twitch.

Vee :

I like the ending, you’re lip sync can be a little tighter, but good job!

Anastasia Ackerson:

Funny concept! It definitely would be well done if finished but overall i think what you have is pretty nice!

Kyra Simone:

Nice poses, but I notice all the body parts move individually and the other ones have to wait their turn. To fix this, make sure the whole body moves in a similar arc in the extreme drawing phase.

Richard Adams:

Beautifully drawn, great character designs. Just too few frames per second, like an animatic rather than a finished animation. Animation lacks polish.

Darren Evander:

animation too clunky and spacing is wrong,sometimes the action is too fast and too slow.learn the basics before doing acting choices.