Dakota Mano:

Cool!! :D

Joshua Morley:

Nice style to this animation, very fluid and tracks well. The end doesn't super line up with the SFX, but it still reads well!

Zamanimation:

Nice! Good timing and fluidity, I think the "could you try harder" is the best part. A more straight-on camera would help for the second character - the current angle from 235-300 makes her face shape look a little odd.

Z S:

The lipsync's a little off at points, but everything else from the movements to the set and the lighting are all solid stuff.

nathan:

Needs work but nice!

Courtney Lynn Oberbeck:

I really like this shot. There is defiantly a story and the animation was nicely done. You can see that you went the extra mile with your shot by set dressing and lighting it.