Fabian:

This could work as an animatic but as full animation, I don't think so.

Ramsey Pierson:

Very nice drawings, I just wish you would have animated their full bodies as well. Good job.

John Tyson:

There's almost no animation in this, put less into the background and actually animate their bodies, give them life.

Brian W.:

Artwork is pretty good. Try separating your characters from the background so you can do more with them.