Piotr Skulimowski:

Nice drawing.

Cory Parks:

Our blacksmith character (I'm assuming, sorry) seems really dead to me. You've done some great clean up work, but he just stares, never changing expression til the end. It's almost a little creepy.

Emily Spearman:

Nice, but it seems like the dialogue isn't synced up properly? A technical issue perhaps?

Austin Hambrick:

work on that lip sync and your golden very good though

Diane Aarts:

wow that's some fluid animation. nice drawings.

Reginald Crumpler:

Nice piece. Wish the ogre at the end had a bit of animation as well though.