Richard Adams:

There's a mechanical, floaty quality to the movements that need improving. Go search the forums here for posts on floatiness and mechanical, robotic movement. Your idea and staging works well. Good choice of rigs.

John M:

Nice, but the second characters movements are very floaty and need sharpening up.

Aaron Clement:

Too pose to pose...a bit floaty, too. I love her reaction at the end.