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My Second Entry

by Rachael Ogunbowale

Final Rating: 3.57. Finished 102 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Rachael Ogunbowale

Description: Here's my second entry in this competition. Hope you enjoy.

Experience: Almost 2 years

Time taken: 2 Weeks

Comments:

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Caitlin Carpenter:

Nice job getting the animation. This shot would improve if one of the characters were flipped so that they're facing each other.

Kyra Simone:

Real smooth transitions between poses btwn 55 and 222, but the poses themselves need to be more defined otherwise.

Luna Leandro:

Has potential, but referencing live action would beniefit the acting. The poses are a bit weird and the timing is off. Also it feels like it has too many unecessary inbetweens, specially at the "hey hey hey" and "really sorry" bits.

Lola Robey-Levine:

Lipsync is on point, just wish there was more development in the posing