Timothy Muller:

Hello there. My recommendation for you would to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!

Emily:

Its a good start, but the timing is off. Try working in some more arcs in parts like the hands and heads. I also couldn't understand what the small kid was trying to do.