Comments:
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Hadas Rosen:
The fast cut when he discovers the pencil is really jarring, I'd have one shot that shows what you want instead of cutting gratuitously! Things need time to read.
Elisabeth Janerka:
Nice potential, but the very first shot if the pencil being alive, is waaay too short.
siavash hashemzadeh:
9
Animator: Kavan
Description: A student struggling with exams.
Experience: 3 Months Blender
Time taken: 1.5 Weeks