Sabrina Winkel:

Needs improvement... On... Everything

Marcella D.:

before working on the character animation, try to make sure you set up the video setting before anything else.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Oh come on, it's barely finished... this is barely expression... a stiff rough of bare bones... push it further next time.

Monica Stringer:

this is very unfinished, the fact that the only finished character is the one that has the least amount of dialogue is disappointing. This seems more like a promising rough draft than a finished animation.