Comments:
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Michael Whitley:
I love your idea with POV, very creative. That being said, the "daughter" (the viewer) seems as though her view is on a tripod and very mechanical. Also you should work on your rendering i noticed an issue with your lighting try and mess with your decay rate a bit so you will have smoother lighting.
Deanna Keogh:
clever idea
David Wevill:
I like the idea but I think maybe a little more emphasis on her offer would have improved this, like if she had gestured towards her fridge or handed her a bottle.
Marcella D.:
Not Bad.
Jordan Lewers:
Very interesting idea with beautiful lighting! It would have be nice to have seen some lead-up before the girl asks about the alcohol though
Connor Leuck:
The camera move at 140 happens at the same time as an action of the mother. You might delay that or not make it so extreme.
Miele:
I love the first person perspective!
Gaucelm De Villaret:
Cool set-up and idea, but it is not as expressive as it might be.
Animator: Eric Raffle
Description: not much to tell
Experience: not enough
Time taken: 2 weeks