Marcella D.:

Awkward.

Fernando Incetta:

A long road ahead, but you are on your way. Read about the 12 animation principles and start working from there. Good luck!

Kevin Cooper:

This needs some reference footage. Act out the audio on camera. Using some sort of reference footage will give you better poses and timing. Currently, it looks unfinished. Movements are floating from key to key, and the computer is doing to the tweens. You don't want that. You want fluid motion that looks realistic.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Too stiff... barely body language, if any... barely see a sign of expression...
Also, audio cut!