Daniel Miltinan:

Still needs quite a bit more inbetweening

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Kudos for the effort of drawing all that. Unfortunately, the design of the characters are not very consistent for the setup... A bit of a mishmash... The movements are too fast and basic to comprehend, and they feel a bit empty. This seems to be a case of looks-before-substance.

Steve Schwartz:

90-138, she is all over the place and it doesn't really read too well. I would tone her movement down, or at least restrict it to only arm movement.

Jordan Lewers:

Appealing characters, but the posing and animation are lacking

Marcella D.:

Ok.

Mark Hanson:

Too many out of control poses. It's all over the place but it does retain the characters' integrity and shapes

Connor Leuck:

There are too many cuts making it hard to process everything happening.

Keely Imai:

Looks good overall, nice and clean. There a couple of things that could really help push this: timing and making sure your characters are maintaining consistent size. I mainly noticed this through frames 100-140. Good work!

Monica Stringer:

the mothers movements are a bit to jerky and hard to follow