Comments:
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Connor Leuck:
If he's talking to someone in front of him, perhaps do an over the shoulder camera angle of the woman.
Stellar job on the guy's animations though. That typing is fantastic
Jean-Guy MacLeod:
It's not clear that he's talking to someone across the desk. But I like the poses and the background looks great.
Alec Farai Munhapa:
could do with some smoothing on the contrasts. but otherwise okay
Sajjad Afzal:
this is the first entry i am seeing and it is a great piece of animation. Looks like top 10 stuff.
Joe Levand:
Awesome concept! The lip sync feels a bit off but the posing feels really natural! Great work!
PRIYA RANJAN DEB:
typing animation can b done with care.. fine tune the shot and it will b a good one..
Yurika Nishi-Imai:
I love the part when he starts typing with just his index fingers.
Great work atmosphere too.
I saw your WIP, and I think it was a good call that you pulled Mery's shot out. (Otherwise, it would've looked overcrowded)
One part that I think could be better, is to move the closed eyelids up a little when the eyebrows raises around frame 85 (the eyelids can still stay shut). Just so they would look more connected.
But other than that, great! PS. Nice rendering too!
Animator: kristin
Description: One of these moments when you have a major problem with your computer and you are happy that you make it through the line and then ... your support doesn't listen to you.
Experience: CG student. one year of experience.
Time taken: about 5 days (and one day for lighting and rendering)