Comments:
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Cameron:
Lipsynch needs a lot of work. Try not to hide characters' faces when they're tallking.
Michael Minasyan:
no emosions
Yuri Marcel Vieira:
the young character almost don't look at the old one, he should keep eye contact sometimes
Jaime Colque:
you should select the colors better but the animation seems good
Joel Murphy:
blink.
April Slocombe:
The older man could have turned his head on "Why?" Other than that, the animation is good on the whole and I like the ending of the younger man falling in the stream.
Animator: Christine Young
Description: An elf tries to warn his friend.
Experience: Student
Time taken: 2 to 3 weeks